Sunday, March 31, 2013

So much depends upon . . .


so much depends
upon

a white frozen
pond

near the dark
mountain

beneath the blue
winter
sky

xx

12 comments:

  1. You need a red wheelbarrow and a white chicken, too!

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  2. So much...so much depends upon...moments to witness so sights like this. spectacular. Xoxo

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  3. When clouds are like an echo of the pond, when shadows remind of the black mountain, only blue remains,as ultimate skyline..

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    1. Malyss -- !! So beautifully said - a poem in response to a poem. xx

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  4. Coincidentally, I just started reading Love That Dog and WC Williams bio A River of Words to my 5th graders today! I'll have to show them this post.

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  5. What a fabulous WCW imitation! I wrote one way back in college, and your words make me want to find it in the files.

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  6. Love That Post! Love that photo! Love that part of the world! Love the words you say! :o) ~Rita

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  7. Fifth graders are reading this with me. Do you think it counts as enjambment when the entire poem is one thought?

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    1. This poem uses enjambment, yes, in the way that each line continues into the next. (It could be one thought or many.)

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