Sunday, March 31, 2013

So much depends upon . . .


so much depends
upon

a white frozen
pond

near the dark
mountain

beneath the blue
winter
sky

xx
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12 comments:

  1. KateMarch 31, 2013 at 8:35 PM

    You need a red wheelbarrow and a white chicken, too!

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  2. JenniferMarch 31, 2013 at 8:41 PM

    So much...so much depends upon...moments to witness so sights like this. spectacular. Xoxo

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  3. Theresa MilsteinMarch 31, 2013 at 9:10 PM

    Love your take on this poem.

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  4. MalyssApril 1, 2013 at 4:22 AM

    When clouds are like an echo of the pond, when shadows remind of the black mountain, only blue remains,as ultimate skyline..

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    1. Sharon CreechApril 1, 2013 at 7:40 AM

      Malyss -- !! So beautifully said - a poem in response to a poem. xx

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  5. brattcatApril 1, 2013 at 8:26 AM

    somewhere wcw is smiling.

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  6. BethanyApril 2, 2013 at 8:34 PM

    Coincidentally, I just started reading Love That Dog and WC Williams bio A River of Words to my 5th graders today! I'll have to show them this post.

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  7. Library JewelApril 3, 2013 at 9:41 PM

    What a fabulous WCW imitation! I wrote one way back in college, and your words make me want to find it in the files.

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  8. Sketchbook WanderingApril 4, 2013 at 10:44 AM

    Love That Post! Love that photo! Love that part of the world! Love the words you say! :o) ~Rita

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  9. Mrs.HaugenApril 4, 2013 at 3:41 PM

    Fifth graders are reading this with me. Do you think it counts as enjambment when the entire poem is one thought?

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    1. Sharon CreechApril 4, 2013 at 6:23 PM

      This poem uses enjambment, yes, in the way that each line continues into the next. (It could be one thought or many.)

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