Sometimes
you have to rip out
big chunks
of the story
in order to
fix
lumpy, bumpy bits.
(Meanwhile, this is what our driveway looks like today.)
Life and writing, serious and humorous, old and young, past and present: it's all part of the fabric.
“Maybe we’re here only to say: house, bridge, well, gate, jug, olive-tree, window--at most, pillar, tower--but to say them, remember, oh! to say them in a way that the things themselves never dreamed of so intensely.” --Rilke
What a good comparison to writing! I hope you are smoothly crossing the driveway soon.
ReplyDeleteBoy! Have you been busy!
ReplyDeleteOne book that needs no weeding for clumps and another memorable first line...my all-time-favorite...“I am doomed to remember a boy with a wrecked voice – not because of his voice, or because he was the smallest person I ever knew, or even because he was the instrument of my mother’s death, but because he is the reason I believe in God; I am a Christian because of Owen Meany.”
ReplyDeleteThis makes me smile :)
ReplyDeleteJust have to figure out the right bits.
Don't you love editors? They convince us to rip apart the pieces we truly love. Enjoy the new driveway! We park on driveways; drive on parkways. What gives?
ReplyDeleteOh my gosh!!!! Owen Meany. I almost forgot. Thanks for the reminder, Kate. You probably realize I'm a big Irving fan.
Is it in front of your door ?!:(
ReplyDeleteMalyss: yes.
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