tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3328453083715960526.post4436517399746177399..comments2023-10-02T05:31:15.837-04:00Comments on Words We Say: ContemplationSharon Creechhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01297551991159941966noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3328453083715960526.post-53565112464685329012015-05-28T15:40:36.011-04:002015-05-28T15:40:36.011-04:00Thank you for reminding me of this post and of thi...Thank you for reminding me of this post and of this 'craft move.' Sometimes I'm not consciously aware of all the 'moves' I am using, but I know I learned them gradually, over many years of writing. xx<br />Sharon Creechhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01297551991159941966noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3328453083715960526.post-73592180147467581962015-05-28T15:35:34.463-04:002015-05-28T15:35:34.463-04:00Your writing has taught us so many different ways ...Your writing has taught us so many different ways to incorporate your craft moves into our writing. In one of your blog posts, "Contemplation," we found a craft move that we love and that we use in our own writing! The way that you space the sentences really emphasizes each word and makes the reader think about why you made that writing decision. And it makes you think about the meaning of each word. Also, we liked how you put a question into this poem. The question: "But see that lone figure?" really made us feel more engaged in your writing because it made us think back to the picture. Overall, you and your craft moves inspire us to write every day! <br /><br />Jojo, Caroline, and Alex -- Grade 5, Fay SchoolAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3328453083715960526.post-11949194515214300102014-10-04T09:48:33.360-04:002014-10-04T09:48:33.360-04:00I'll bet your editor loves coming to your neck...I'll bet your editor loves coming to your neck of the woods.Lori Skooghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03458010787337492501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3328453083715960526.post-33046926665638554042014-10-03T12:32:34.502-04:002014-10-03T12:32:34.502-04:00Oh, I just love this post! Makes me think editors ...Oh, I just love this post! Makes me think editors have the ability to get right to the heart of a manuscript. They walk so close to the work, they feel every part of the ocean in front of them.possehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04147097673732572305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3328453083715960526.post-13967444976829212902014-10-02T23:19:15.066-04:002014-10-02T23:19:15.066-04:00The power of perspective.
Lovely photo and words....The power of perspective.<br /><br />Lovely photo and words. Soothing.Karenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00652954536843347233noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3328453083715960526.post-19655767758265769722014-09-30T20:28:59.755-04:002014-09-30T20:28:59.755-04:00Lucky are the 2 of you to be partners in publishin...Lucky are the 2 of you to be partners in publishing. And she looks like quite an explorer out there, I can almost see her dancing with enthusiasm! Sketchbook Wanderinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06850319000824866265noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3328453083715960526.post-76188023543884073252014-09-30T15:07:19.270-04:002014-09-30T15:07:19.270-04:00Unless she's a 'wide body' and she doe...Unless she's a 'wide body' and she doesn't look to be, she should have little trouble making it back. I've survived the way out and back myself on occasion. That's quite a view from out there. You got a book about Maine life coming? or Maine cows? of Maine water?Birdmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16634185585147630883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3328453083715960526.post-30410210744258875772014-09-30T04:25:16.503-04:002014-09-30T04:25:16.503-04:00Someone you can trust - that's a good feeling ...Someone you can trust - that's a good feeling for heart and mind ! Malysshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08285965495493508425noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3328453083715960526.post-16049301668568100082014-09-30T01:10:19.765-04:002014-09-30T01:10:19.765-04:00Bonjour,
Un lieu où tout semble si serein... où l...Bonjour,<br /><br />Un lieu où tout semble si serein... où l'esprit peut faire le vide.<br /><br />Gros bisous ♡martinealisonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04055152925986659065noreply@blogger.com